stunting report for my midterm let me know what everyone thinks
11-15-2004, 09:08 PM
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Re: stunting report for my midterm let me know what everyone thinks
i pm'ed teach c6 and asked him if he would have a sec. to look this over for you and give some pointers....
11-15-2004, 10:19 PM
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Re: stunting report for my midterm let me know what everyone thinks
sorry i have to agree with Rocket(except don't rip it up). Just revise it. i could not read through the whole thing. Structure and transition were poor. your audience has no knowledge of what we do so you need to inform them. i would not go into great detail about past riding from the early 1900's. Your goal is now, not then. touch and go.
i usually edit my papers a few times and always use spell check cause i mess up.
good luck bro
i usually edit my papers a few times and always use spell check cause i mess up.
good luck bro
11-16-2004, 10:01 AM
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Re: stunting report for my midterm let me know what everyone thinks
Originally Posted by Tony D
Well Done You took it back pretty far great info-----Respect
11-16-2004, 01:49 PM
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Re: stunting report for my midterm let me know what everyone thinks
Originally Posted by Tony D
Well Done You took it back pretty far great info-----Respect
11-16-2004, 02:43 PM
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Re: stunting report for my midterm let me know what everyone thinks
Originally Posted by Tony D
OH ---another guy with an opinion...
11-16-2004, 03:29 PM
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Re: stunting report for my midterm let me know what everyone thinks
thanks guys! tony d: i wanted to use your enthusiasm in your article for a point that we all put alot of heart into this sport. hope you don't mind the context
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